When I am with you… my mind is no longer my own,
When I am with you… there is no place on earth where I am alone
When I am with you… the world is a beautiful place,
When I am with you… all I see is your smiling face.
When I am with you… in you I have full faith
When I am with you… why do I get worried even when you are a little late
When I am with you… the sun forever seems to shine
When I am with you... you belong to me … forever mine
When I am with you… I love you the way a man loves, the way a man would
When I am with you… I love you in a way no one ever could
When I am with you…I want the moment to last forever
When I am with you… I look forward to spending days, months and years together
When I am with you…easy to love you more and more everyday
When I am with you… this becomes much harder to say
When I am with you… my mind is no longer my own,
When I am with you… there is no place on earth where I am alone
© Bhuvan Gupta
When I am with you… there is no place on earth where I am alone
When I am with you… the world is a beautiful place,
When I am with you… all I see is your smiling face.
When I am with you… in you I have full faith
When I am with you… why do I get worried even when you are a little late
When I am with you… the sun forever seems to shine
When I am with you... you belong to me … forever mine
When I am with you… I love you the way a man loves, the way a man would
When I am with you… I love you in a way no one ever could
When I am with you…I want the moment to last forever
When I am with you… I look forward to spending days, months and years together
When I am with you…easy to love you more and more everyday
When I am with you… this becomes much harder to say
When I am with you… my mind is no longer my own,
When I am with you… there is no place on earth where I am alone
© Bhuvan Gupta
20 comments:
Once again a good poem... There are more of these coming I'm sure!! Keep writing man!!
you're good with this kinda stuff. keep the good work up :)
wallaa habibi kya shayri likha hai really it has been a privilege reading all your poems, expecting for more romantic poems from you :)
hwy reall nice one
keep it going:)
Congratulations!! You have a nice blog.
I finally got round to writing this comment!! you are a really talented poet and im sure you've touched loads of people's hearts with u're words...you're really have a way with words! im sure your an inspiration to other poets alike! keep up the good work!
Truly romantic words from the heart of a very romantic person.Keep it up!!
Awesome Romantic Stuff, dude!
After reading your poem, mera DIL garden garden ho gaya :)
That is a gorgeous love poem!
wonderful expressions of love..!!
I like this! Keep it up anakin
Bhuvan How it is been possible ?
But really , It's very good. Hope So....
heyy
Very beautiful thoughts.
i really loved this poem.
keep posting....
I loved it from the bottom of my heart.....salute to your talent dude....keep writing
Bravo, Bravo. I loved it. noting like this one
If i need to rate this is the best work u ever did.
Dont mind i will use this in future.;)
This is really surprising to me as I never knew this side of Bhuvan. Well done Bhuvan... Very nice poem... Keep it up and I would certainly look forward to see more from you soon. Once again congratulations...
Nice poem...
It's really wonderful..
The feelings expressed are great and the way you express it is even better..
Way to go.........!!!
This will make a good song.. keep up
The rep. of [when I am with you] boosts up the intensity all through.. Lovely poem. Liked it and voted at indiblogger.
cheers!
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